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Disordered.


Adopted to a party forsaken

Further filled with pity taken

Awakened to a dreary message

Messing with the dirty dressage

Wounded sturdy for the next

Surrounded by the worst of best

Tricky still to stop the healing

All you have is what you’re feeling.

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Categories: Art, PoetryTags: , , , , , , , , ,

4 comments

  1. Great rhyme scheme and meter. This poem has both a strong message and powerful feeling. Well done.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. I really like this – it’s resonant and rhythmic.

    Liked by 1 person

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