Effort’s fortunes feign a chance,
A final fate that gives a glance
The world ahead in paths that wind,
Drifting, Shifting Falling through
But always a step behind,
You.
Effort’s fortunes feign a chance,
A final fate that gives a glance
The world ahead in paths that wind,
Drifting, Shifting Falling through
But always a step behind,
You.
You have some very nice alliteration going on here, and it makes your work sound absolutely wonderful. Also, wonderful concept. Good Job!
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